Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is widely considered that homeschooling is the right strategy

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child education, while the essentiality of going to an actual

school

is

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a belief

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common. Even though undoubtedly some

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in creating a

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and highly efficient learning program tailored for their

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needs, I believe that there is no alternative to proper socialization for the

children

and group classes that only the

schools

can offer. On the one hand, assuming that you have enough time and resources,

children

studying educational materials at home can be very effective, free of distractions, leaving most of the day for physical activities and fun.

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indeed looks very appealing, when your child doesn’t need to waste time

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the

school

bus

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or get bored while someone else’s child cannot answer the teacher’s question. In a recent study conducted by

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Seaside university, homeschooled

children

had on average the same or a bit better grades than their peers from real

schools

, but at the same

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a lot better developed physically just because they were left 1 to 1.5 hours more for physical exercise daily. On another hand, at some point in life the education at home is over,

children

either go to university or begin working, and the only way they can be socially prepared for

this

is if they went to a real

school

. At

schools

, the

children

not only inevitably learn to build communications, friendships and relationships

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but

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obtain the vital experience of participating in group projects – that the exams perhaps will not evaluate but

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adult life will. My

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very shy and introverted son was homeschooled for the

first

three years, from absolutely not being able to talk to anyone outside his family, but just the

first

year at

school

“fixed” him and now he communicates like a normal kid, sometimes we even go fishing together. In conclusion, despite

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advantages of leaving

children

at home so they complete the

school

program in the most efficient manner,

schools

are still essential for developing

children

and preparing them for their future.