Some people say that industrial growth is necesary to solve proverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is leading to poverty and should be stopped. Discuss both view and give your opinion?
The usefulness of industrial growth for every country is debatable. Some individuals hold the opinion that it is needed to reduce poverty while other
thinks
that the number of needy Change the verb form
think
people
is increasing with industrial
rise. Correct article usage
the industrial
This
essay will discuss both perspectives and I think that solvency is rising with industrial growth.
To begin
with, people
who say that industrial progress is noteworthy to reduce scarcity think that peoples
are getting lots of unemployment with its rise. The development of Fix the agreement mistake
people
manufacturing
sector creates Correct article usage
the manufacturing
a huge numbers
of job Correct the article-noun agreement
a huge number
huge numbers
opportunity
which can lead to Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
decrease
Correct article usage
a decrease
the
rate of unemployment and help Change preposition
in the
people
to live their life delightedly. Moreover
, more and more industry and factory
Add an article
the factory
makes
a Change the verb form
make
countries
economy strong Change noun form
country's
as a result
it will help to enrich the lifestyle of needy
community. Add an article
the needy
For example
, those country
Change the determiner
that country
those countries
who
become developed is just because Correct pronoun usage
that
of
they have Change preposition
apply
bigger
industrial field which creates working facility for their population. Add an article
a bigger
Therefore
, the more industry have
a countryChange the verb form
has
, the
less unemployment there will be.
Add a missing verb
has, the
On the other hand
, others people
who say, industrial prosperity is the reason for poverty assert that industrialisation is increasing gap
between wealthy and needy Correct article usage
the gap
people
. Because of it, the reach
Correct your spelling
rich
peoples
are becoming reacher whereas poor Fix the agreement mistake
people
peoples
become Fix the agreement mistake
people
more
poorer. Change the word
apply
Industry
creates work Add an article
The industry
opportunity
Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
,
but provides a nominal salary to their labourer than their profit resulting in they are finding trouble Remove the comma
apply
to maintain
their daily activities. Change the verb form
maintaining
This
has
Add the particle
tohas
lead
to become their life harder Wrong verb form
led
to
harder. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, it was often observed that companies owner purchase one after another luxurious vechiles
continuously while worker finds lots of unexpected Correct your spelling
vehicles
puzzle
to bear their Change to a plural noun
puzzles
dalily
basic demands. Correct your spelling
daily
Hence
, it is leading to create social degeneration among people
.
In conclusion, although
industrialisation may create a
huge employment by working their Remove the article
apply
people
cam reduce scarcity, it also
expend
contraposition among owner Change the verb form
expends
amd
worker. I think that Correct your spelling
and
this
problem can be solved id
bureaucracy makes Correct your spelling
if
regulation
Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
of
Change preposition
on
employers
Change noun form
employers'
employer's
payment
so that they can sustain their daily needs. So, the deficits of industrial growth are completely negligible compared to the benefits.Fix the agreement mistake
payments
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