In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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guns

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for self-defence and recreational purposes

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significantly increased

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of shootings.

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, gun usage is one of

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prevailing and worrying aspects

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any society.

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, I am going to examine how dangerous gun is for habitants of a region.

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, adolescents can be endangered by recreational

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which

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legal in numerous countries.

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,

guns

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require owners to know enough

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knowledge

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for using them correctly while most

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teenagers

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the teenagers

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do not read instructions and guides before starting to use

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. As a consequence, they become

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them self

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.

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, a study by the University of Queensland indicates that more than

one

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of shootings'

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casualties in

the United States are children who are injured or killed in street conflicts.

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is because American authorities were unable to limit gun ownership among citizens.

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, family violence can be executed by

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unwantedly.

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means that spouses who have

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for self-defence might use their

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when they reach

highest

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point of sexual violence.

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, a recent study by the Tehran University reveals that 45

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of conflicts in American families lead to

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a woman

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woman

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being injured by

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or

guns

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. To conclude, based on convincing

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evidence

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,I strongly believe that

guns

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play an important role in having upward trend shootings

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continents and think that government must seek

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apply

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a deterrent or limitation.