Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others; however, believed that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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in
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modern world, the existence of
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becomes a heated topic among
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. Some of them are entrusted that
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' existence will protect the wild
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.
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, most of them believe
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are cruel and should be close. Personally, I strongly believe that
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can be used as a picnic place where school children can be improving in their knowledge and will be familiar with different kinds of
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.
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, it will be beneficial to
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.
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and foremost,
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are places where professional staff take care of the wild
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for their timely hygienic food
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and routine health checkups. Each wild animal is placed unconnectedly with enough space to feel like they are in a forest.
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, it will help in educating the children and
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of the
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, because every day many
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visit,
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as foreigners, local and school students and
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create many jobs for the
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. Which will help in the growth of the country’s economy.
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, sometimes
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endanger
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, wild
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are addicted to hunting for their food always. We have seen many accidents in
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a boy climbed on the wall of the zoo to carry a kite and unfortunately he was slipped into the cage of the tiger.
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,
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should shut down to save
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. Because wild
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cannot be trained well.
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, well-trained staff can make it possible. In the conclusion, as I mentioned
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are the safest place for
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and they will help in educating
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and as well as
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will be used to seeing the humans around them. The zoo management prefers to do always research on wild
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and hired professional staff who make well-trained. These
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will convert the source of income for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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