Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Given the pivotal role of outward appearance, the question of whether it should be considered less significant than the
function
when designing a building has garnered widespread interest. One common perspective that many people, myself included, advocate is that the inner function
indeed is the most significant factor
which should be considered.
Opponents of this
thinking cite the fact that outward design contributes to the aesthetic beauty of the community creating diverse architecture for the surrounding environment. Besides
that, it is also
a factor
for tourists considering dropping in as they always desire to look great in their photos when going somewhere new. Nonetheless
, this
thinking fails to factor
in the fact that inner function
plays a crucial role in meeting people's needs, which means that an individual decides to come to a building for the purpose building
that can serve rather than just outward design. Change preposition
of building
For instance
, residents go to a hospital for the purpose of being cured, if it is not facilitated with a good ventilation system or lack of light, it can affect negatively human well-being.
What is more, a building is a construction designed to exist for a long time. That being the case, it is necessary to guarantee the inner system is enough in order to not suffer from weather impacts. If the owner only concentrates on the appearance of the building when designing rather than constructing the inner function
, in the worst-case scenario it can lead to a re-erection. That is
the reason why the value of focusing on purpose while
designing a building should not be underestimated.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that aesthetic appearance comes with some desirable effects, but i
believe that Change the capitalization
I
function
should be considered as the most important factor
while
erecting a building to ensure positive development overall
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