You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint.. In your letter, you should tell: Say why you are writing and how you feel Explain what happened Tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to announce that I had an issue with one of your drivers who takes me to

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Monday. I have been using your taxi for several years now, and it will shock you when I say that one of your drivers threw me out of his car because I want to change my destination but not so far. At that moment, I lost my patience and shouted at him but he left me in

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of nowhere. I was very upset and I couldn’t figure out why did he acts as he did. I will file a formal complaint against your company and of course that driver because you ignored my complaint that I sent just after that and no one took it important. But now I expected you to please take

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matter and take necessary action on

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driver that I mentioned his name and the car number in the complaint that I sent before. Thanks for your consideration,

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faithfully, Nadia Neisari

Submitted by amir2965 on Mon Aug 15 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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