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According to one survey, the life expectancy of people is increasing in developed countries. What problem will this cause for individuals and society?

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According to one study , it is shown that in developed countries
people
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both
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both
 disadvantages and advantages that
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their
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their
lives
. It has some drawbacks ,
namely
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people
 have to deal with more
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difficulties
dificulties
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difficulties
 and sadness in
life
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problemes
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 in taking care of
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elderly
 individuals .
However
,
this
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 expected that
life
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 expectancy of individuals
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 and it has some disadvantages.
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 of
life
 were more,
people
 would face with more
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difficulties
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difficulties
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lives
,
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because
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because
life
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problems
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problemes
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problems
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 .
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example
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 a
90 year old
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 one is likely to see the death of
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 family
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members
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member
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 level of
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stress
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stress
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, society must
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 some facilities for
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elderlies
 that
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 a high budget,
thus
 more 70 years individuals force more cost toward government ,
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 they need medicine , hospitals,
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social
socieal
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social
servises
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services
 ,etc.
On the other hand
, when ones live more than 80 year old , it has some benefits .
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 they have more
oportunity
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opportunity
 for being happy
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 because they have more time in their
lives
,
thus
 if they used their
life
 correctly they would have more
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opportunity
 to be
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successful
succesfull
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successful
.
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instance
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 old is enough time to
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spend
speand
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spend
 on learning
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useful
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useful
 skills and taking
benefits
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benefit
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 of them . In conclusion,
advantages
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the advantages
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 and disadvantages of living
long
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 are equal and
depends
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 on how
people
 use their
lives
,
in addition
how
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to how
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 government manage
this
 situation .
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