You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Hello Ahmed, Hope you are doing fine! As you know that summer is on the way and I am not planning to take any courses at the university

this

summer, since I was fully equipped with many courses in the spring term and I found it an opportunity to take a short break, visiting you and your family. My

last

exam will be on the 13 of June and I am planning to arrive in the town after two days from it, I am planning to stay for two weeks so I can have the chance to do many activities,

for instance

, diving in deepwater, visiting theatres and attending local festivals. I will be grateful if I can stay at your house as I checked many hotels and unfortunately they are fully equipped with tourists, they put me on a waiting list

however

I do not want to risk that I will not find a place to stay.

In addition

this

, I understand that we are relatives and your hospitality will be much better than hotel services

however

I am offering to pay all my expenses during

this

vacation, as well as the activities expenses that can occur if your family will join us. I can not wait to see you all, especially your little girl Katie. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Rami

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

227 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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