Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few people think that
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it is okay to remain in
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bad situation, while others think, that it would be better if you can try and improve
things
. In my personal opinion , I do not think it is okay to accept
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bad situation. On the one hand,
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the best option is
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a bad scenarios
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, because there is no other option available.
For example
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crisis can leave people with no choice,
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lack of options lead people to remain in the same situation. Sometimes, it can be worst if you try to improve
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personal
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whatever in your plate.
On the other hand
, it is always good if you can try to improve bad
situations
because
such
situations
can change with your hard work.
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you have to get
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risk
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if you want to improve
things
to the better side and remember you can only eat fruit
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if you plant them.
for instance
, you can improve your educational qualification, professional qualification and your skills. by improving those
things
, you can
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easily
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easily
get your dream job or highest paying position . It can be
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hard while trying to achieve
things
but in the
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you can achieve much better
things
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path. In conclusion,
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believe
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belive
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believe
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it is
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good
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and improve
things
while you can. There are can be
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you cannot improve
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reasons that out of your control. But generally, if you try hard, there is a big
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chance
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chance
that you can achieve anything in your life.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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