Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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believed
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by, living in a nation where
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have to communicate in a foreign
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can make practical difficulties and major social
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completely agree with the
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statement
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can cause major misunderstanding between two parties
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problem
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. living
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somewhere
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you have to communicate in a
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unfamiliar
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absolutely
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absolutely
difficult.
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language
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barrier makes
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worse.
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, if you have to visit your employer and you do not have any idea how to report your work progress to him is, as
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as risking your whole carrier.
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you want to buy food
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, you can not visit the shop
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barrier.
miscommiunication
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miscommunication
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so many
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between
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, so everyone
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to work on their
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skills.
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,
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have to face mental
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caused by
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language
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barrier. when you can not speak
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properly, you can not make new friends because other
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to face difficulties to understand you. since you can not meet
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familiar
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familiar
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, you start to
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nervous and stress
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environment
envirobment
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environment
and everything around you makes you more destress.
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, aloneness can lead to mental illnesses like anxiety and depression. according to the new
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lanka
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, 45% of
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who living in abroad suffer from mental illness.mental illnesses are more dangerous than physical ones. In conclusion, living in a place
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you have to speak
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unfamiliar
unfamilier
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an unfamilier
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language
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can cause so many
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like
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mental illness and
misunderstanding
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misunderstandings
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between
people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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