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Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar some think that these taxes are a good idea while other disagree. Discuss both you and give your opinion?

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There is doubt that obesity and diabetes have become
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the most
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 common
disease
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 in the world. Recently ،
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
 began to impose laws to reduce
this
 phenomenon. Many
people
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belive
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believe
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 that an excellent step by the
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government
goverment
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government
,
other
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others
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 argue that
this
 might not
to
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be very helpful.
This
 essay will explain both views and lend my support to the former one. A large number of
people
 believe that increasing only
fill
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fills
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 the
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government's
goverment's
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government's
 coffers with money.
Additionally
, paying an extra tax would increase
burden
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 and might deprive them of
sugrary
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sugary
surgery
 products.
Furthermore
,
this
 would adversely impact the manufacture's that might have to bear heavy
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losses
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looses
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losses
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 due to lack of demand.
On the other hand
,
this
 step by
government
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the government
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 would
disencourage
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discourage
people
 from buying fast food and drinks that
contains
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 a large amount of sugar.
This
 is not only
beneficial
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the
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 adult but
also
the
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 children, who are
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tempted
attempted
atempted
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attempted
 by junk food and chocolate. These are
a
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major causes of obesity and
diabetic
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diabetes
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 and tooth caries in teenagers. According to
latest
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the latest
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 reports, increases
prices
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in prices
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 on
pepsi
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 and
kitkat
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KitKat
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decreases
decrases
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decreased
 sales
30
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by 30
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 per cent compared to the
last
 year.
Therefore
,
this
 could be helpful in controlling
increasing
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the increasing
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 numbers of
diabetic
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a diabetic
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patient
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patients
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,
this
 measure will
enhancing
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 better for general health and promote both
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government
goverment
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government
 and
people
 to reduce
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their
thier
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their
 spending on medical In conclusion, though it might be a rigid step taken by regulating bodies, I believe, it can be helpful for everyone to make them more
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healthy
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heathy
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healthy
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 and fitter.
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