Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the *causes* of this? What are the *effects* of this on individuals and on the society?"

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that
currentley
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currently
, a number of humans have been
spendig
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spending
time
at home
more
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less than previous. There are two main reasons which cause mentioned problem and
also
two essential effects on
people
and the community.
Firstly
, enlarging of working
times
lead to that
employies
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employees
can not reach their homes early. In the other words,
people
who ought to go job
for
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live
on
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have been starting to
work
at the
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beginning
begining
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beginning
of the morning and have been leaving quite late
times
from
work places
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workplaces
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.
For example
, if a usual white collar does not depart from
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early, he will arrive to home late
abviously
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obviously
.
Secondly
, another reason is that transport
times
cause waste the
time
for society. In fact, humans who are living in the big cities have spent many
times
on way due to traffic congestion and distance which covers from their houses to
work places
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. For
insatance
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instance
, ın Tokyo to arrive the
work
citizens have to consider traffic difficulties.
On the other hand
, cited issues have effects on society and individuals
also
.
First
of all, because these
people
can not spend
time
with their family
sufficently
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sufficiently
, members of these families can not understand the loving of a house. To illustrate, a child who is his father comes from
work
very late can not spend
time
with
parents
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his parents
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efficiently
efficently
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efficiently
.
Second
of all, the
time
that the
people
are spending out of
house
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much more than home lead to affect working citizens badly from
pshycological
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psychological
aspect.
Thus
, lack of enough hours for relaxing
cause
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to feel
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tired
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tried
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all the
time
. To conclude, owing to long working
time tables
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and transportation hardness, many members of society can not spend
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adequate
adequet
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adequate
hours in their homes.
Moreover
, families of these
people
have been living unlovely situations and mentioned citizens
also
themself have been suffering from
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psychological
pshycological
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psychological
problems.
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