You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Black, I am Mr Zay Yar Myint, your new neighbour who just moved into number 571

last

weekend. I am writing

this

letter to invite you to a celebration I am going to organize on the coming weekend at my home. I and my wife

are

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planning to hold a

party

with a small group of our friends, around 15 to 20 people on coming Saturday. We planned to get a small unplugged band which will play cozzy 90's music. Along with it, we will provide a guest microphone for anybody who would like to sing. Regarding the food, we will arrange a barbecue area where everybody can choose meats and vegetables they like and let the chef grill for it. With respect to the drinks, we bought a few packs of beers and wines for adults and orange juice for kids. You and your family are cordially invited to join the

party

in which we can get to know each other. I am sure both of our daughters will be quite excited to play together and our wives will

also

get some chatting time.

Besides

, as we have to do some preparations during these days for the

party

, we may make some noises during the daytimes. I would like to apologize for any inconveniences that might occur and I hope you would understand. Looking forward to seeing you at my

party

on coming Saturday. Yours truthfully, Zay Yar Myint.

Submitted by zayyar6367 on Mon Aug 15 2022

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

242 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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