Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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era with

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pace

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life

and

work

. The development of technologies and economy

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a staggering speed requires

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efficiency and productivity

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employees

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employees

among many careers and disciplines. Someone works long

hours

and

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leaves

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very limited

time

for

leisures

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leisure

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. Personally, I admit the importance of enough

time

consupmtions

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consumptions

consumption

for

work

.

However

, I

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to make a balance

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life

and

work

by allocating more spare

time

after

work

. The reason above can be

further

supported by several disadvantageous outcomes which make working long

hours

to be less beneficial.

Initially

,

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work

schedule without sufficient

time

for

rest

or recreation largely takes our energy and concentration.

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, people

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tired of

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routine

tasks

and prone to get

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rate of mistakes after the long-hour

work

.

This

couterproductive

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counterproductive

counter-productive

outcome is due to the very little

time

for

rest

.

In addition

, the allocation of overloaded working

hours

leads to

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substantially abridged

time

with family and friends. The shorter

time

with them may lead to conflicts along with

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frustrated mood during subsequent

work

.

By contrast

, we get relaxed and satisfied by spending

time

with families and we will be motivated for the

work

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day.

Lastly

, extra pressure and anxiety might be induced by reduced

time

for recreation and entertainment. Our

nerver

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never

server

are easily get strained if we

work

too long as our

barin

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brain

actively involved details of

tasks

.

This

condition increases the chance to get into a stressful and nervous stage which is not conducive for both

life

and

work

. It is indeed that the cons are always attended by pros. Working long

hours

significantly

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the progress of

work

to some extent and can largely benefit both individuals and groups. Admittedly, greater

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efforts

effeorts

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effort

lead to higher productivity.

Nevertheless

, it is worth thinking if the great amount of

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time

been used do really transformed into

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values during

work

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In real

life

situation, someone may put plenty of

time

for

work

while they finish

tasks

at low

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efficiency

efficieny

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efficiency

by distraction from other

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or due to

shortend

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shortened

shorten

time

for

rest

.

Therefore

, people need leisures to recover from

intensitve

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intensive

tasks

. The good use of

time

is more important

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the

time

has been used. To sum up. I do agree that any career requires great

efforts

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and enough

time

consumpution

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consumption

. While achievements were not defined by the number of

hours

sitting in front of the desk. We should leave ourselves a breath to take a good

rest

and get ready for the challenging

tasks

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high efficiency.