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Some think students must travel to a foreign country in order to learn it's language and customs. Do you agree/disagree?

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These days,
language
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 is considered an opportunity to elevate human well-being. Some people believe that learning linguistics in native-speaking countries is the most effective
way
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. In
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 essay, the reasons to support my agreement that travelling to foreign countries is a promising method to study foreign linguistics will be presented in the following paragraphs. The
first
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 benefit of learning another
language
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 by living in the country is that students will learn the correct
way
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 to use it from the native speakers.
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, by learning
English
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 by travelling to England, they can get used to the accent and learn some slang words of
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 by learning with native teachers who use
English
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 as a mother
language
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. Learning in an ordinary classroom cannot provide these types of skills from
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 classes tough by
Thai
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 teachers.
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, living in a place surrounded by foreigners is an efficient and fast
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 as it enforce you to listen, speak, read, and write in a particular
language
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. Without using particular linguistics, there is no other
way
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 to communicate with others.
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, my German friends can speak
Thai
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 fluently after living in Thailand for a year as they were surrounded by a crowd who cannot speak German and
English
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.
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, they have to communicate with
Thai
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 people every day. As the result, they use a very short time to learn
Thai
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. Apart from learning a
language
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, travelling to a foreign country can provide you with the opportunity to exchange the culture, tradition, and art of living in a particular nation, which will make you enjoy the culture and understand more about the background of the
language
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 resulting in better communication. In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons about the advantages of learning a foreign
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 by staying in the countries including being taught by a native speaker, surrounding by native citizens, and exchanging the culture, I strongly admit with the view that
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 is the most promising method to study new languages.
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