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Some think students must travel to a foreign country in order to learn it's language and customs. Do you agree/disagree?

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These days,
language
 is considered an opportunity to elevate human well-being. Some people believe that learning linguistics in native-speaking countries is the most effective
way
. In
this
 essay, the reasons to support my agreement that travelling to foreign countries is a promising method to study foreign linguistics will be presented in the following paragraphs. The
first
 benefit of learning another
language
 by living in the country is that students will learn the correct
way
 to use it from the native speakers.
For example
, by learning
English
 by travelling to England, they can get used to the accent and learn some slang words of
English
 by learning with native teachers who use
English
 as a mother
language
. Learning in an ordinary classroom cannot provide these types of skills from
English
 classes tough by
Thai
 teachers.
Moreover
, living in a place surrounded by foreigners is an efficient and fast
way
 as it enforce you to listen, speak, read, and write in a particular
language
. Without using particular linguistics, there is no other
way
 to communicate with others.
For example
, my German friends can speak
Thai
 fluently after living in Thailand for a year as they were surrounded by a crowd who cannot speak German and
English
.
Therefore
, they have to communicate with
Thai
 people every day. As the result, they use a very short time to learn
Thai
. Apart from learning a
language
, travelling to a foreign country can provide you with the opportunity to exchange the culture, tradition, and art of living in a particular nation, which will make you enjoy the culture and understand more about the background of the
language
 resulting in better communication. In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons about the advantages of learning a foreign
language
 by staying in the countries including being taught by a native speaker, surrounding by native citizens, and exchanging the culture, I strongly admit with the view that
this
 is the most promising method to study new languages.
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