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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Introduction
Nowadays, many
people
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 are moving to foreign countries to study or jobs. When you live in a foreign country if you don't know the
language
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 has some social
problems
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 as well as practical
problems
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. I agree with that point and these reasons will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
Body paragraph 1
To begin
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 with,
language
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 is very important for everyone to communicate with
people
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. We have seen so many
people
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 going to foreign countries, there are various reasons
such
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 as studies, working for a company, for living, etc.
For instance
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, When we go to foreign countries, we can meet a number of native speakers but we cannot communicate because of
language
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 issues. At the same you want to make a friendship with your neighbours, if you know the
language
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 you can do it ,
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Otherwise
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,Otherwise
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 it is not possible. So, without ,
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language
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the language
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 we cannot maintain social relationships.
Body paragraph 2
Secondly
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,
language
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 is essential for daily life. Without
language
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, we face many
problems
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.
For example
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, When you go shopping but you can not explain properly which product want, in
this
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 situation they will give you a different product. So,
this
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 type of problem will happen, if you don't know the
language
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.
Furthermore
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, when you work for a company in a foreign country, without a
language
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 you cannot survive because you can not explain your work to clients and cannot share your thoughts. These are some
problems
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.
Conclusion
Finally
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, I believe a foreign
language
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 is very important for living and avoiding social
problems
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 as well as practical
problems
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. So,
people
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 should learn a foreign
language
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 when they want to live abroad.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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