More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

It is observed that the number of

people

who depends on their own

cars

as the main transportation is significantly increasing. There are some problems that can be caused by

this

phenomenon, but there are

also

some solutions to tackle the issue.

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results in many problems. the

first

problem would be the environmental issues. The more private

cars

are used, the more

air

pollution

can be caused.

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, every transportation releases carbon dioxide when they are moved, and it causes

the

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air

pollution

.

Moreover

, if

people

choose not public transportations but their own

cars

, the number of

cars

which moved has

increase

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increased

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.

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,

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more CO2 would be released by it. The

second

one is

traffic

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a traffic

the traffic

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jam

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jams

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. the number of

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private

cars

which are used is too much compared with the limited road and in the end, it causes

traffic

jam

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jams

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.

Nevertheless

, there

some

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are some

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keys which can solve it. The

first

solution is

that

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encouraging

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encourage

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people

to use

the

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public

transportations

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transport

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. It reduces not only

air

pollution

but

also

traffic

jam

, rising the independence

on

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of

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private

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a private

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one

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ones

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. The

second

key is

that

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apply

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encouraging

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encourage

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people

to use

the

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apply

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electric

cars

, which utilize electricity for

the

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fuel. It makes

air

pollution

be reduced, reducing

release

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the release

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of CO2. The

last

key is

that

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widening the road. It decreases the

traffic

jam

as

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by

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increasing the amount of treating

transportations

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transportation

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. In conclusion,

although

relying on their private

cars

makes lots of

problem

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problems

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,

it

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they

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can be solved by doing

such

things mentioned above.

Thus

,

people

should be encouraged to do

such

things.