More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

It is observed that the number of

people

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who depends on their own

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as the main transportation is significantly increasing. There are some problems that can be caused by

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phenomenon, but there are

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some solutions to tackle the issue.

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results in many problems. the

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problem would be the environmental issues. The more private

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are used, the more

air

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pollution

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can be caused.

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, every transportation releases carbon dioxide when they are moved, and it causes

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air

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pollution

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.

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, if

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choose not public transportations but their own

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, the number of

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which moved has

increase

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.

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,

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more CO2 would be released by it. The

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one is

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traffic

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a traffic

the traffic

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jam

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. the number of

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private

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which are used is too much compared with the limited road and in the end, it causes

traffic

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jam

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.

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, there

some

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are some

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keys which can solve it. The

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solution is

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apply

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encouraging

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encourage

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people

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to use

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public

transportations

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. It reduces not only

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pollution

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but

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traffic

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jam

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, rising the independence

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of

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private

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a private

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one

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ones

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. The

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key is

that

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apply

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encouraging

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encourage

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people

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to use

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apply

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electric

cars

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, which utilize electricity for

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apply

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fuel. It makes

air

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pollution

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be reduced, reducing

release

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the release

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of CO2. The

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key is

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widening the road. It decreases the

traffic

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jam

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as

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by

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increasing the amount of treating

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transportation

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. In conclusion,

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relying on their private

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makes lots of

problem

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problems

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,

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they

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can be solved by doing

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things mentioned above.

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,

people

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should be encouraged to do

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things.