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Some people think that the public libraries are no longer necessary, others believe that public libraries still perform useful functions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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In order to gain more knowledge and find different types of articles,
libraries
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 are the sources for many books. A few portions of the population think that
libraries
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 are no longer required and the Other portion of mass says it is required for the development of
society
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. In
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 essay, I would discuss both views. Due to the advancement of technologies we have today, most of them spend
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 reading the novels which are required as per their needs.
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, many people assume that the important importance of
libraries
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 is no longer needed because they think it contains old books which are not updated regularly.
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, is the
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 constraints which we have in today's
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 many feel that it is better to read or find online rather than
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 and spend future commuting to
libraries
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. To illustrate one example. most of my friends who are doing
Ph.D.
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 in science and technology are spending more
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 surfacing the information rather than going to
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 to study, The reason for
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 is that they are occupied most of the
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 doing other jobs and could not find
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 for it.
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,
libraries
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 had played a huge role in
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, especially for the underprivileged student, who cannot afford digital technologies. Many governments own schools and college has
libraries
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 that are used by student for their exam preparation.
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 not all the books are available on the digital platform, so
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 is one point where many still give importance to
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.
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, employment opportunities are available because of
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, Many people are live are dependent on them. In conclusion, I believe that
libraries
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 play an important role in our
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,
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 some may not able to go and study and feels that there is no longer important to visit.
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, many feel that it has an essential role to play in the development of today's
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