growth of online shopping will be the closing reason of all shops in cities and towns, do you agree or disagree
Undoubteadly
, Technology has changed the world a lot in recent times, shopping is the most one things that have changed with Correct your spelling
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progress
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Science
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science
this
development led to the Linking Words
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of many traditional stories. I radically disagree, in Correct your spelling
closure
this
essay, I'll explain my point of view.
Surely, online Linking Words
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shopping
shooping
has many advantages Correct your spelling
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has
many positives, the most important of which Correct word choice
and has
is
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are
quickly
, diversity, and avoiding crowding. Replace the adverb
quick
Therefore
, you can purchase any product you need just by pressing a button while sitting at home. Linking Words
Furthermore
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browsing
the goods Change the verb form
browse
be browsing
at
other countries and Change preposition
in
buying
by credit. Change the verb form
buy
be buying
For example
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through
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by
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using
useing
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using
Amazon
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the Amazon
website
you can purchase any items even if it is Add a comma
,website
on
another country, and Change preposition
in
this
process won't take long.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
e -shopping
has a lot of negatives, Add a hyphen
e-shopping
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especially
espically
the people with little experience shopping ، Correct your spelling
especially
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frauds
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is that
buying
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buy
try
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check
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shooping
by traditional stories. The main cause I prefer to Correct your spelling
shopping
buying
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buy
that
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is that
texture
and smell it and Add an article
the texture
trying
it more than one time. Change the form of the verb
try
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assistance
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assistant
advice
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advise
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apply
electonics
and food
In conclusion, despite the advantages offered by online shopping, shopping by stores and malls remains more secure and safetyCorrect your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite