person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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are judged these days by how much money they have rather than their morals and character. I totally agree with

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instantly judge others by what clothes they wear or products they own

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suggest that a lack of traditional values in celebrities demonstrates that being a good person is not held in high regard by society.

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seem to hold someone in high regard if they have designer clothes, a luxury car or the latest smartphone, and rarely look inside that person.

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superficial attitude is common in all walks of life, whether it be how a store attendant treats customers in a shop, or what someone might think of applicants when interviewing them for a new job.

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, at most restaurants,

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who wear business suits are treated with more respect and courtesy than those who wear casual clothes.

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reflected in our celebrities. Most singers, models and actors have neither talent nor moral fibre, but they are still revered because they have a high position in society and seem to have a luxurious lifestyle. Miley Cyrus is a prime example; she does not write her own songs and openly confesses to taking drugs, yet she is still adored by

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all over the world. In conclusion, I believe that being a good person is not as important as wealth, fame and where someone is on the social ladder these days, and

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can easily be seen in how we treat those with no money and how we look up to vacuous stars.