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Advantage and disadvantages of having pets at home

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Three are
lots
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 of families that have at least one
pet
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 in their homes nowadays.
People
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 can teach them different tasks. They need fun and
care
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 just like humans because they are emotionally too.
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, they have
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 of benefits, they have some disadvantages too. In
this
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 essay, we discuss both. There are
lots
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 of bets that living with humans today. They need little food and space for living.
People
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 can teach them how to behave. Sometimes time they learn to be security guards sometimes they are a nurse and so forth.
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example
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, dogs are the most favourite
pet
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 for
people
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. One of the most important duties of dogs is to children
pet
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 security guards from criminals when they go out alone. (One of the most important duties of a dog is to take
care
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 of children).
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 is the
first
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 advantage of having
pets
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 at home.
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, they understand human emotions. Many
people
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 keep
pets
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 to be with them when they are lonely.in modern society, sometimes hospitals use
pets
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 to
care
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 for patients.
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, a Cerebrovascular hospital in Japan uses Dogs therapy to help sick
people
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.
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 there are many advantages of having
pets
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 at home, there are some downsides too.
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,
pets
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 need
lots
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 of
care
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. There are some
pet
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 germs that can harmful to humans. The diseases
people
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 get from animals are called zoonotic (Zoe-oh-NOT-ic) diseases. Zoonotic diseases are too risky for somebody who has an underlying disease. Sometimes the time it can cause pandemics.
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, Coronavirus is a pandemic disease that originated from pigs.
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, choose the right
pets
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.
People
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 have to ask themselves which
pets
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 are suitable for them. Sometimes time they forget it and it is led to be a problem in future.
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, how much do the
pets
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 live? How does the
pet
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 eat? How large will it become? In summary, having a
pet
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 at home has
lots
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 of benefits
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 as they are teachable for various jobs and they are emotional.
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, they have some disadvantages like they need
care
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 and it is important to choices suitable
pets
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.

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