Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the essential factors making a person successful cannot be gained at a

university

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. What enables an individual to excel requires various qualities. I, personally, cannot fully agree with

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statement.

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with, people can learn knowledge and equip themselves with specific

skills

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from

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.

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, Mark

Zuckberg

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Zuckerberg

successfully founded

Faecbook

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Facebook

because he was well trained in computer science at Harvard

University

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. Only by studying diligently at medical school can one medical

students

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become

a world-class physicians

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a world-class physician

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later. Some doctors

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several years at an academic institution, focusing on scientific research to pursue a physician-scientist pathway. They learn from other scientists and cooperate with peer researchers. It is what they have learned

lead

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to their successful career.

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, I concede that only

with

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the knowledge taught at a

university

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cannot guarantee students

to

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apply

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succeed in the workplace.

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,

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graduates might not be able to run a successful business without essential networking.

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, executive and organizational

skills

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are crucial in

promotion

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to higher positions, while training in these

skills

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are

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not always included in higher education curriculums. People improve organizational abilities through daily work and sometimes learn from mistakes. Experience

also

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plays an important role in leading to a successful career.

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, a fresh graduate from even a top

university

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cannot be an outstanding banker without any working experience. In conclusion, the contributing factors to

become

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successful are not limited to what individuals can learn at a

university

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, but

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various

skills

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and

experience

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experiences

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which are accumulated in practical work.