Some people believe that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. While others believe that animals also have right on land. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an undesirable fact that
land
plays
vital
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role for human beings and
animals
. While a section of society believes that
land
should be used for human needs
such
as farming, accommodation and building industries, rather than saving it for endangered species, others hold a view that these pieces have certain rights to reside on the
land
.
however
, I completely agree with the latter view and in
this
,
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I will shed light on both
the
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points before reaching
to
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a reasonable conclusion.
To begin
with, one of the reasons why people are commenting that human beings should have more
right
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on the terrain is because of overpopulation. In the recent era, the population is accelerating which demands more farmland for living which in turn does not allow enough space for
animals
. To exemplify, a large portion of
farm
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land
is replaced with buildings to create accommodations for people.
In addition
to
this
, in order to satisfy basic necessities
such
as food and ,clothing it is vital to establish industries.
In other words
, these industries will produce mass items that will
fulfill
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the need of individuals.
Hence
, utilising
this
land
for citizens is more important than preserving it for species. Whereas others view
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the way to conserve
this
farmland for creatures as they are closely tie-up with nature. In regards to
this
, these creatures build nests, holes,
dens
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for their living.If they do not have enough ground
than
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they will become homeless.
Furthermore
, they maintain ecological balance in nature and
also
plays
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primary
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a primary
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role in
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humankind
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human kind
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.That means,
animals
serve mankind by providing items that satisfy their basic living.
For instance
, we are getting
wools
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, milk,
leather
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from them so it is mandatory to preserve them and provide ground. To conclude,
although
population
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demands
majority
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the majority
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of the
earth
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surface for their needs and
opting
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to save less for endangered creatures.
However
, I agree with the opinion that
animals
are equally important
for
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the
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mother earth and they should be given ground in order to balance nature and mankind.
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