Some people believe that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. While others believe that animals also have right on land. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is an undesirable fact that
land
plays vital
role for human beings and Add an article
a vital
animals
. While a section of society believes that land
should be used for human needs such
as farming, accommodation and building industries, rather than saving it for endangered species, others hold a view that these pieces have certain rights to reside on the land
. however
, I completely agree with the latter view and in this
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I will shed light on both Add an article
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points before reaching Correct article usage
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to
a reasonable conclusion.
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To begin
with, one of the reasons why people are commenting that human beings should have more right
on the terrain is because of overpopulation. In the recent era, the population is accelerating which demands more farmland for living which in turn does not allow enough space for Fix the agreement mistake
rights
animals
. To exemplify, a large portion of farm
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farmland
land
is replaced with buildings to create accommodations for people. In addition
to this
, in order to satisfy basic necessities such
as food and ,clothing it is vital to establish industries.In other words
, these industries will produce mass items that will fulfill
the need of individuals. Change the spelling
fulfil
Hence
, utilising this
land
for citizens is more important than preserving it for species.
Whereas others view in
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this
farmland for creatures as they are closely tie-up with nature. In regards to this
, these creatures build nests, holes,dens
for their living.If they do not have enough ground Correct word choice
and dens
than
they will become homeless. Correct your spelling
then
Furthermore
, they maintain ecological balance in nature and also
plays
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primary
role in Add an article
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the primary
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humankind
human kind
.That means, Correct your spelling
humankind
animals
serve mankind by providing items that satisfy their basic living. For instance
, we are getting wools
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wool
leather
from them so it is mandatory to preserve them and provide ground.
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and leather
although
population
demands Correct article usage
the population
majority
of the Add an article
the majority
earth
surface for their needs and Change noun form
earth's
opting
to save less for endangered creatures.Wrong verb form
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However
, I agree with the opinion that animals
are equally important for
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the
mother earth and they should be given ground in order to balance nature and mankind.Correct article usage
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