A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Garam, I hope you and your family members are doing well during

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pandemic situation. As discussed with you over mobile, I will be on vacation from

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week to

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month and staying at The Mount Plaza in Australia. You know that I have

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dog as a pet

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my childhood and it is always part of my family. Due to travel restrictions from the aviation department, I cannot able to carry my pet to Australia. I am leaving my pet to you, and I know you will take care of it very well. Regarding the diet, I feed him meatballs and a cup of milk in the Morning and same diet additional to it, I will serve some chicken.

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, you know my lounge is enormous and I informed my maid to do the cleaning in the evening. She doesn’t have the main door key and insisted

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collect keys from you to do the cleaning activities. Once she left, kindly confirm that everything is sorted out and arranged properly. Warm Wishes, Jack

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive ır negative development?

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