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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Today there is a controversial problem that whether
people
 should wear modern
clothes
 or keep their traditional costumes. From my point of view, there are some positive and negative impacts on
this
 problem. On the one hand, following modern trends
such
 as wearing western
clothes
 brings a variety of different cultures to a current nation.
For example
, in most Asian countries, there are a plethora of
people
, especially teenagers, who wear jeans and suits for special events
such
 as meeting at the workplace or hanging out with friends.
This
 results in developing a new
culture
 as well as providing more options for clothing selection. Generally, being a multicultural country is extremely beneficial in developing the tourism industry and improving the economic field.
On the other hand
, it is definitely crucial to maintain and develop a country’s unique
culture
.
First
 and foremost,
culture
 has a meaningful impact on local residents, a country could not develop well without its own
culture
.
For example
, in Vietnam, Ao Dai is the traditional cloth and it symbolizes their unique civilization. Even though
,
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 a lot of Vietnamese teenagers wear jeans and suits today but they still wear Ao Dai for special events
such
 as the Tet holiday.
In addition
, the lack of diversity brings several negative impacts
such
 as loss of
culture
. It obviously is important to follow modern trends and exchange
culture
,
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however
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 young
people
 should maintain and develop their own
culture
. In conclusion, wearing Western
clothes
 can be advantageous and detrimental.
However
,
people
 should pay more attention to
educate
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 their children about the importance of maintaining and developing their
culture
 by wearing traditional
clothes
 for special occasions.
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