Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

Hello Ali, I hope you are good. I am Mohammad whom you have met on a trip to Scotland

last

month. In fact, it was one of the best trips which I have ever gone

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Indeed, Scotland is an extremely beautiful country,

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I have found some close friends,

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as you. I am writing to request you to send the photographs of our trip.

Also

, I do not have any partners on

this

trip, but you took some eye-catching photos of me, especially those ones that were taken on the island.

In addition

, we have some pictures of each other. Please send them to me.

Furthermore

, your friend took some group photos, please send them if you receive them. You can send photographs via email or other social networking applications,

for example

, Wattsapp and Telegram,

besides

you can create a group in these applications and send all the photos in it. I am longing to see you again. Best wishes, Mohammad