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Some people believe that a good way to reduce crime is to have longer sentences, while others think that there are alternatives to this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
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 contemporary era,
crime
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 rates have surged dramatically as compared to the past. To bring
this
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 alarming situation under control, society members think that leaving criminals in jails for extended terms can plummet the proportion of
offenses
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offences
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 significantly.
However
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, some argue that the punishment should depend on the seriousness of the
crime
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, to control
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 growing concern. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter and think that considering the situation of the convict and the seriousness of the
crime
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, a sentence should be decided
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.
Firstly
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, out of a plethora of suggestions, the most preponderant one is that criminals should be sent on a long sentence to teach them a vital lesson in
life
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.
Moreover
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, when they waste a key time of their
life
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 in prison, they start to regret their mistakes and
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 learn from their errors.
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, they become more disciplined citizens and learn to make better resorts.
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, a survey showed that 73% of prisoners who spent 10 years or more in jail, never did a
crime
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 again.
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, I think not all lawbreakers deserve to be locked behind bars for an indefinite sentence, rather the penalty should be decided after an evaluation of the
offense
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offence
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.
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, it is a fair way of treating a criminal, as they have certain rights too. To illustrate, a trivial offender should be allowed to dedicate some years of his
life
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 to serving the community,
instead
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 of his whole
life
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 in jail.
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, a terrorist or a murderer should be sentenced to death, to teach other wrongdoers an increasingly important
life
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 lesson. In conclusion, after putting forth all the substantial arguments, I can conclude that
although
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 spending most years of
life
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 in police custody can make crooks obedient residents, other alternatives like execution and serving society should
also
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 be considered to bring the rate of
offenses
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offences
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 down.
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