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Band 4.5

Write a description of your house or apartmen for a website.

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 topic is very intersting and, I like to talk about it. I like to have a green and, beautiful street.
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 located in Canada.
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house
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 has two floor. A dining room and kitchen are in
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 floor. There are four bedrooms in secend floor. All bedrooms are equipped to toilet and bathroom. Dining rooms wall has big windows that you can see outside. All facilitis in
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 dicoreted with wood. Now, I want to discribe the neighborhood. In the garden are so lash and green. The beautiful flowers are grow on
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 wall. In
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 nighberhood has a lot of place to go like: bank, shops, markets and etc. In front of my
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 is a subway station and,
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 to it , it’s a bus station and, there are so easy to use to go to downtown to go to a interesting plase like: amusement park, malls, museum and etc.
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house
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 that I discribe it’s good for a big family, with four childeren and, about the restrictions I should say, you shouldn’t smoking in bedrooms or keeping some animals in
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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