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Some people say that on one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society.discuss both views and give ur opinion.

#people #job #company #society #ur
Three graphs illustrate the kinds of deal with
waste
 in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and
UK
, meanwhile, all values are shown in
percent
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. In general, there are five ways of doing with
waste
, which
are
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 used in these three countries. The most common ways of utilization are recycling in Korea and storage in
underground
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the underground
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 in both
UK
 and Sweden. In
UK
 and Sweden, 55% and 82% of
waste
 are destroyed underground correspondingly,
in contrast
 to Korea, where the majority of
waste
 a bit less than 70% is recycled. Underground way of utilization is
this
Republic
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Republic's
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 only
second
 common opportunity, which contributes exactly 22% to
waste
 utilization. The key difference in dealing with
waste
 between the United Kingdom and two other countries is the fact, that
UK
 uses
in addition
 to incineration and destroying underground
also
 a chemical treatment and dumping at sea, both in 8%. The most unpopular method of destroying
waste
 in
this
 country is incineration, as it is used only for 2%.
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