the best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#road #transport #goods #drivers #test #year

It is a good step and

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beneficial in order to control the fatal

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to retake the driving test every year. While

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road

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heavy transport

drivers

. Most of them do not have enough training and got

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by a chance.

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this

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roads by reviewing the

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of those, who are driving huge trucks once

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a year. Another benefit of revising the test is to make sure that

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to act in a responsible manner

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person to drive, to avoid a chance of an accident.

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to the right candidate. To sum up, I believe it is a nice way to improve the quality of

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impact on controlling daily

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it develops a sense of responsibility in them.

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