Some people believe that increasing taxes on various industries will reduce pollution. Whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,

pollution

is become a serious topic over the world because of

the

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climate change. While some people believe that

pollution

will be reduced if the tax on several

industries

increased

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, others argue that there are better alternative ways to solve

this

problem. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of

argument

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and state my own view. On the one hand, the benefits of escalating tax

is

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by no means negligible.

To begin

with, since the vast majority of

industries

have no profits for society and lead to

produce

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high

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amount of emissions might be closed.

That is

to say, having faced difficult situations makes them find a solution or leave the industry.

For instance

, some of those producing a lot of

pollution

find a way to reduce

this

amount; even decrease

the

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work time.

Moreover

, not only

it

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helps

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to reduce

pollution

,

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also

it would be useful for society.

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in turn can

be invest

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in some

researches

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to tackle

this

difficulty.

On the other hand

, others put forward the argument that

this

action may

causes

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problems and

its

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better to act in other ways. The most compelling reason justifying their assertion is that some

industries

may be going bankrupt.

In other words

,

instead

of rising

tax

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taxes

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, public transportation could be expanded. More specifically, it will cause many

industries

that have significant facts in society to stop working.

Furthermore

, it leads to serious difficulties and it may

causes

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the country not to meet its needs. To sum up, there are various factors which rising the

pollution

and it’s better to avoid them

instead

of focusing on

industries

.

In addition

,

this

law can be applied only to a series of

industries

that have a large share of air

pollution

production.