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Many people prefer to studying in different subject in different country , whats your opinion?

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I am a graduate student
of
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MA
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an MA
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 in English Language and Literature at the Azad University of Kerman in Iran. I am interested in being accepted for a
second
master
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 position in Marketing Management, specifically Digital Marketing, because I consider
this
 program as an opportunity to improve my professional skills in a place with superior professors and highly knowledgeable lecturers. So, my motivation for studying for a
second
 MA is because, as the world of business
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 globalized, the need for young
talented
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 with extensive specialized skillsets is increased so a
second
master
 will deepen my knowledge, increase my career and will allow me to provide a great opportunity to challenge myself through critical thinking as well as communication and leadership, these are perhaps being the most obvious reasons why so many contemplating of pursuing a
second
master
 degree in marketing areas,
although
 these two
master
, both very different, they complement each other well.
Moreover
, my real dream is to teach English at a university in my city professionally,
besides
,
set
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 up my own business. So, taking part in
marketing
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a marketing
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 program is competitive especially in London, with
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a multi-cultural
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multi-cultural
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 background, it would stimulate me to take more responsibility
in
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 complex tasks and duties as well as increase my chance of acquiring the professional experience that many employers around the world looking for.
Therefore
, I am excited to expand my knowledge of marketing communication in
order
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being
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 an efficient employee as well as
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 my skills
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 public
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, and work with certified researchers in a desirable environment and facilities.
Moreover
, my
last
 MA dissertation examines Erich
Fromm
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 theory of Love in the selected poems of two poets from completely different countries, one is a female poet from Iran, another one was a male poet from Ireland, which was conducted with the help of Prof. Shahram R. Sistani. It is mainly focused on their social life and how they expressed their feeling
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 different cultural backgrounds in their poems.
Also
, it is analyzed the similarities and differences
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 these two poets based on Erich
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 concepts. I
interested
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 in Gender study because as an Iranian girl I faced many inequalities in my country
especially
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 in my city.
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 has a huge role
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 women's life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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