Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a discussion between 2 different groups of people.
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who believe that nowadays the main environmental problem is the loss of particular
species
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of plants and animals,
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people believe there are more essential environmental
problems
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. In my opinion, each kind of animal and plant has an important and irreplaceable role in the natural
cycle
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. The main
species
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couldn't substitute for the
extinction
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ones.
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, one animal in the
cycle
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could be a hunter for different
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and prey for other ones either.
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of
extinction
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, the hunters could not provide their foods and get in danger of
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or they may increasingly eat other kinds of
species
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and put them in danger of
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.
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, all kinds of plants have their benefits,
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as oil, fruit, and seed. So all kinds of them are needy.
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, we have other significant environmental
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such
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as increasing world temperature and greenhouse gasses, causing many
problems
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such
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as melting ice ages, destroying the Ozone layer, the lack of water, and air pollution. They are serious
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and make intense difficulties for humanity.
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, I believe all of these
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are in the
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and have various connections.
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, air pollution and an increase in greenhouse gasses cause changes in temperature, floods, or drought, and
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many
species
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undergo in danger of
extinction
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or extinct as they can not tolerate the difficulties. In conclusion, in my view, nowadays there are many environmental
problems
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.
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, the loss of particular
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of plants and animals is as important as increasing temperature and greenhouse gasses. All of them are in a destructive
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and affect each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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