Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a discussion between 2 different groups of people.
First
who believe that nowadays the main environmental problem is the loss of particular species
of plants and animals, second
people believe there are more essential environmental problems
.
In my opinion, each kind of animal and plant has an important and irreplaceable role in the natural cycle
. The main species
couldn't substitute for the extinction
ones. For example
, one animal in the cycle
could be a hunter for different species
and prey for other ones either. As a result
of extinction
, the hunters could not provide their foods and get in danger of extinction
or they may increasingly eat other kinds of species
and put them in danger of extinction
. In addition
, all kinds of plants have their benefits, such
as oil, fruit, and seed. So all kinds of them are needy.
However
, we have other significant environmental problems
such
as increasing world temperature and greenhouse gasses, causing many problems
such
as melting ice ages, destroying the Ozone layer, the lack of water, and air pollution. They are serious problems
and make intense difficulties for humanity. However
, I believe all of these problems
are in the cycle
and have various connections. For instance
, air pollution and an increase in greenhouse gasses cause changes in temperature, floods, or drought, and consequently
many species
undergo in danger of extinction
or extinct as they can not tolerate the difficulties.
In conclusion, in my view, nowadays there are many environmental problems
. Besides
, the loss of particular species
of plants and animals is as important as increasing temperature and greenhouse gasses. All of them are in a destructive cycle
and affect each other.Submitted by chizarisara on
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