Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a discussion between 2 different groups of people.
First
who believe that nowadays the main environmental problem is the loss of particular
species
of plants and animals,
second
people believe there are more essential environmental
problems
. In my opinion, each kind of animal and plant has an important and irreplaceable role in the natural
cycle
. The main
species
couldn't substitute for the
extinction
ones.
For example
, one animal in the
cycle
could be a hunter for different
species
and prey for other ones either.
As a result
of
extinction
, the hunters could not provide their foods and get in danger of
extinction
or they may increasingly eat other kinds of
species
and put them in danger of
extinction
.
In addition
, all kinds of plants have their benefits,
such
as oil, fruit, and seed. So all kinds of them are needy.
However
, we have other significant environmental
problems
such
as increasing world temperature and greenhouse gasses, causing many
problems
such
as melting ice ages, destroying the Ozone layer, the lack of water, and air pollution. They are serious
problems
and make intense difficulties for humanity.
However
, I believe all of these
problems
are in the
cycle
and have various connections.
For instance
, air pollution and an increase in greenhouse gasses cause changes in temperature, floods, or drought, and
consequently
many
species
undergo in danger of
extinction
or extinct as they can not tolerate the difficulties. In conclusion, in my view, nowadays there are many environmental
problems
.
Besides
, the loss of particular
species
of plants and animals is as important as increasing temperature and greenhouse gasses. All of them are in a destructive
cycle
and affect each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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