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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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There is a dramatic change to what
people
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 wear
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 day, many would love to wear jeans and a t-shirt and wear tradition only for festival days, there are many reasons for
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, In my opinion, it is a positive development. Most of the dresses which are available in the market are western
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,
people
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 find
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 material in every shop and the reason for
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 is the celebrities wearing
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dress
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 in movies where
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 find it attractive and they tend to buy
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clothes
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. To illustrate
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, recently many
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 started wearing suits for marriage, rather than wearing the traditional
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 for
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 events.
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, it is very comfortable and can be adjusted whenever we want with other
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 since they are available everywhere.
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, the crowd started wearing traditional regalia only on festival days,
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most community who are working in the corporate world will come to the office on Diwali in traditional garb,
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 is to show that it is a special day.
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, nowadays the materials for traditional
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 are seen less in the market and sometimes it takes time for a person to wear and it is a time-consuming process.
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, many societies are feeling shy to wear their native
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 on a daily basis when they see the majority of the public coming in western
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.
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, college-going students would prefer to wear jeans and shirts rather than wearing the traditional
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. In conclusion, the frequent availability of
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 in the markets and the trend which is seen in movies are making
people
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 wear western
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 and wear traditional dresses only at occasional events. overall I think that it is a positive development for society.
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