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Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis.Other people believe that world population is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of world's economy and society. Discuss both views and give your option.

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Nowadays, the human community is exceeding the capacity of the earth,
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 explosion has both positive and negative effects. Some individuals think it might lead to a crisis but few individuals opine that it leads to growth in the economy and society. In
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 I am going to explain both views and give my opinion According to some people increasing
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 lands up in a crisis,
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 gives rise to an
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 in demand for food, housing, employment and many more.
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, overpopulation leads to overcrowding and poverty, which, in turn, leads to
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 increases pollution due to an uprise in transportation and
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 increased demand for renewable resources. To exemplify, India is a
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, which is not able to become a developed
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 because of poverty due to overpopulation.
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, some individuals have a different view on
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 leads to the growth of mankind on Earth. In their opinion rise in the human species creates an opportunity to rule the world.More people working in a
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 increases the economy of that
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.To illustrate, the US government had announced free educational and health facilities for American aboriginals with more than 2 children in order to
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 the community of native Americans so that they can raise their power over the immigrants. To conclude, the
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 has both advantages and disadvantages but according to my opinion disadvantages outweigh the advantages so, I think the global crisis is the end product of the
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 explosion.
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