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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the coming times,
people
 going to be only passengers, because in the meantime all
vehicles
 including cars , buses, vans and trucks can we
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drive less
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.
people
 only have to sit inside
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the vehicle. I believe there are more disadvantages than advantages in that situation. On the one hand, because of the new technology thousands of
people
 are going to lose
the
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 job. there are so many
people
 who live because of
driving
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a driving
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 career.
For example
, in
India
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,India
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 20% of
population
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the population
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earn
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 money from driving. In that case, so many individuals going to jobless in future.
furthermore
, driving is a skill, so drivers have to
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 new skills if they want to survive . but most of them
not
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 very well educated and most are old
people
, so it is really hard for them.
Other
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 thing is
,
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 these
type
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 of
vehicles
 definitely going to cost more than normal transport. That means only rich
people
 can afford that kind of
things
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thing
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.
On the other hand
, there can be
few
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 advantages.
Firstly
,
this
 innovation going to
really
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 helpful for
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 and old humans.
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,
disabled
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a disabled
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person
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people
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 cannot have
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a license
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license
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 in Sri Lanka, but in the
future
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 they can easily go around with their own vehicle.
same
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 goes
with
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 elderly
people
 .
This
 is the most effective advantage, which can happen because of driverless
vehicles
.
Additionally
, time
save
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 can be
another pros
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. anyone can work while travelling.
For example
, you can arrange
zoom
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a zoom
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 meeting or you can do studies.
Thus
, driverless
vehicles
 really going to be helpful for individuals who have busy lifestyles. In conclusion, future transport materials going to
driveless
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drive less
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 and it makes more drawbacks than
benefites
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benefits
, like jobless humans and costly
vehicles
. Meanwhile saving time and helpful for
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 and old
people
 can be
a
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positive side.
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