You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing

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letter to express my interest in being membership of your gym as my residence is just walking distance from your location and I want to start gym activities in a short time as per my health advisor.

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, I need to know the offers available for new enrollments

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the payment procedure and whether the duration is hourly/monthly/weekly or yearly, which will help me to make my arrangements.

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, could you please share the activities details which are covered in the package

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Significantly I won't put down my weight

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I would like to do workouts like treadmill, bench press, weight lift and abdominal crunch.

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, I need the best coach to train me as am new to these gym activities.

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, what are the processes that need to be done for my admission, I have a national identity card with residential proof of electricity bill hope these 2 documents are enough to do the joining process. yours faithfully.

ananth

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Ananth

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coherence and cohesion

Organize your paragraphs more effectively to separate distinct ideas clearly.

task response

Consider improving the clarity of your requests by breaking them into simpler sentences.

suitable writing tone

You have a polite and formal tone appropriate for a letter to a gym manager.

complete response

You included several questions which show your interest and engagement with the gym services.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

168 words

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You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get news event. Do you think the advantages outwwigh the disadvantages?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.