Some scientists believe that studying 3-year-old children can predict their criminality. To what extent do you think a crime is a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

The fact about some

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believe

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in criminality being studied in the

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children is so unbelievable.

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,I believe that crime could be studied

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the product of human nature

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It is possible to stop children from developing into criminals when they become adults with the few points I will mention in

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essay.   At the age of

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the

child

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is still so young to know or differentiate the bad from the good

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examining his attitude at

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age is wrong because

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he knows nothing at

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point of his life.

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the

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of a

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at

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point is derived from his environment and his

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activities.

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what the

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sees or hears

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becomes his language because

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could be all he understands.so,judging him from

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old I believe is so wrong.

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,I strongly believe that the

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or the future of a

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can only be determined by his upbringing

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above every other thing or person,the

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or guidance of the

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plays a large role in the life of the

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.The

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of the

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around a

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could build a concept of life in the

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so the

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are advised to be a super role model to the

child

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and always portray an emulative

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. There should be

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positive home training

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every

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to enable him to mind himself and disengage from crime. In conclusion ,I believe that home training has enough role to play in the growing up of the

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and so is the

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of the

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or guidance around the

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and not the unbelievable scientific prediction of criminology.