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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary household. Wwhat problem are caused by household waste, and what solution may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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It is sometimes argued that those garbages which are generated by families can
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 as a concerning issue nowadays. While it may
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lead to various difficulties, it would
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 by using many solutions in different
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 times. It is proved that many environmental
problems
 are related to waste materials, the main of which produce by households.
Firstly
, landfills are major sources
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 emitting Methane, a gas which makes our planet warmer.
Secondly
,
garbages
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garbage
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 are contained many
hazardious
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hazardous
 substances which can enter into drinking water, causing a wide range of diseases.
Finally
, they are many harmful
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 animals.
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, it has
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 that many birds could not recognize plastics from foods. Fortunately, there are many solutions to meet these
problems
. It seems that using biodegradable material has
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 role to reduce harmful garbages.
Moreover
, people could have an active role by cutting down
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application
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.
Furthermore
,
separation
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the separation
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 of wastes and
recycling
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the recycling
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 of
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trash
trashs
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trash
 can help to decrease garbage production. In conclusion, while household waste
productions
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 are getting a serious issue for people because of increasing environmental
problems
,
but
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there are many well-known methods to tackle these
problems
.
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