In many countries not enough student are choosing science subjects at university. -What are the causes of this? -What are the effects on the society?

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Nowadays, modern
science
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is having a fast development and more and more relevant job opportunities are provided by
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companies.
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there are fewer people choosing
science
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as their major in universities. There are several things that cause
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phenomenon, and
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has some influences on the country. There are some reasons to think about why more and more
students
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do not prefer to choose
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to study.
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, most
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professionals are very serious when they teach
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, in some ways the teaching method is quite boring. There is no attraction to people.
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, Some parents regard that
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is not about daily life and it is so far from us,
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students
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cannot get support from their relatives.
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, society has a misleading impression about
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- only excellent
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or adults can do it!
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, many
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who want to pass their exams easily and hope to have a relaxing life in university will not put effort into studying
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. It is not surprising to see them not picking
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. As we can see, on one hand, there will have high demands for
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researchers. If organisations and companies have no access to find
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staff, they will provide higher salaries to attract professionals. That means other jobs
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as teachers, salesman and factory workers have lower payments compared to
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professionals.
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can result in some unfair work issues.
On the other hand
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, society needs skilled researchers to do some research to develop our modern technology. Without more
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who study
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supporting technology projects, the country's development will not keep going. In conclusion,
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people have different feelings about
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subjects, we still pay attention to it given it has a big impact on our society in the future.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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