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The way many people interact with each other nowadays has dramatically changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of human relationship? Has this been a positive or negative development?

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Company's way of communicating in
this
 recent times, among each ,other has changed drastically since the use of modern technology. has
this
 affected
people
's relationships positively or negatively
nevertheless
,
this
 essay will discuss more
on
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the positive than the negative effects.
Firstly
, since the revolution in communication quite a number of things has changed ,
people
 can interact with their loved
ones
 through the use of mobile phones ,not just phone call but can
also
 do video and conference calls with their beloved
ones
.
for example
, series of apps for making video and conference calls is installed in phones
such
 as Facebook , what's
app
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, and telegram to mention but a few.
Furthermore
, Due to the economic ,crisis
people
 work hard in other to meet up their daily needs,
also
 the nature of work can consume
one
's time, it is undeniable
this
 can reduce
one
 on
one
 communication among
people
 ,especially their loved
ones
.
secondly
,
people
 can perform transactions with their mobile phones without
inconvenience
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 of going to the bank and staying in a long queue. Modern devices
such
 as computers could be used in various offices
thus
, helping employers and employees to carry out their work efficiently and effectively. With mobile devices , groups can meet new friends and
people
 can establish business ideas with others from different diversities
this
 helps to strengthen business
partnership
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 across other nations
hence
, builds the country's economic growth.
On the other hand
, the use of modern technology has made isolation to be on the increase,
people
 hardly come together ,especially with their elderly
ones
 to communicate
one
 on
one
 and tell stories of folk tales. In conclusion, the way
people
 communicate in these recent, times
as
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 been of
a
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great benefit. It has made life easier, and convenient, and things can be accessible like bank transactions.
This
 has
also
 improved and established friendly relationships with
people
 from different diversities.
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