Most large companies nowadays operate multinationally. To what extent multinational companies have responsibility toward local communities in which they operate?

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Overseas corporations’ obligation towards the area where they are based has been a topic of concern in
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I agree that these businesses should bear responsibility for helping local communities, it ought to depend on the will of the firms. On the one hand, the appearance of these multinational
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already enhances employment in the neighbourhood.
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, when Samsung established new showrooms and retail stores in Hanoi, many job seekers were employed, which decrease the unemployment rate and
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the living
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, international companies
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pay taxes which contribute tremendously to the local areas as
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amount of money will be spent on social benefits
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as educational services and medical care.
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, it is
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onligation
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for providing support for local communities where they base their offices.
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, businesses can substantially benefit from being
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responsible
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by actively protecting the habitats that ensure their sustainable long-term growth.
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Coca cola
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corporation had many campaigns to improve climate;
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, they receive
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from the local
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government
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government
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, foreign companies should be very
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conscious
of their track record, when it comes to
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community
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as these are directly tied to
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name.
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if the company has steps to
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the citizens enjoy their product without concerns about the environment. In
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the operation of large enterprises from wealthy nations in less developed countries naturally sparks several positive changes, I think they should be responsible for the local issues.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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