Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

In several

countries

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the usage of gadgets,

such

as

phone

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phones

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, are totally banned.

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might consider

as

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a considerable development, as the devices influenced

student’s

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students’

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behaviour and physical during

learning

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section. It seems to me that

this

policy would probably

brings

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either benefits or drawbacks for the

students

. The

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ides

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of

this

notion would be discussed

through

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this

essay. Restricting

students

to operate their smartphones during

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class improves their

consentration

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concentration

. They would be more

focus

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as a result

of the lack of distraction. Social media,

for instance

, sometimes produces notification

sound

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which

it

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will plague the

student’s

attention to the materials that had been taught. Eventually, both teachers and

students

are inevitably distracted.

Then

the classes would run worse.

Thus

,

phone

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is a source of focus

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disruption

distruption

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disruption

during the study session.

In addition

, the use of mobile phones

closely

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linked to

student’s

health

issue

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issues

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.

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of

a

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frequent operation of

devices

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some parts of

body

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would suffer cause of it.

For example

, too often staring

on

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the

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gadget surfaces

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occasionally

ocassionaly

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occasionally

irritate their eyes.

This

is not good for the

student’s

visibility healthiness in long-term of

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.

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the

smartphones

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access during class would not only be better for their health but

also

for their

consentration

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concentration

in the classroom. To conclude,

forbiding

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forbidding

the student to use their mobile phones has

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advantages

adventages

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advantages

.

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not only

assist

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students

improve

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their focus but

this

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also

has

a

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potential to harm the body as

negative

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effect.

Therefore

, If

the

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all nations restrict the usage of gadgets, both

student’s

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students’

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consentration

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concentration

and health would be

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increased

incrased

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increased

.