You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. In your letter - explain why you changed jobs - describe your new job - tell him your ither news

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Dear Ali, I hope you are well. Sorry I have not been in touch for
such
a long time, because I had a very busy month. I am writing to talk about my new job in an international company. In fact, my previous job had a strained atmosphere and I was not comfortable there.
In addition
, my colleagues do not have friendly behaviour.
For example
, one day I forgot to close one of my room's windows, and
thus
next
morning, I had an argument with my coworker.
Furthermore
, I had to do repetitive tasks every day and it was so boring. Recently, I am working for a big electrical company and I like my new career. Indeed, it is far better than my
last
job and has a number of advantages.
For instance
, I have a higher income, full-payment insurance is considered for me, there is a friendly atmosphere in my workplace, and the most important item for me is that it is a creative career. Surprisingly, I bought a house in the suburb and we will move there
next
week.
Moreover
, we are planning a trip to your city and I wish I could see you. I am longing to see you again. Give your wife my regards. Best wishes, Mohammad
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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