Nowadays, all ages people 
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  our 
 are becoming addicted to technological devices 
 as 
. They are influenced by it alarmingly. There are many reasons behind using 
 to a greater extent. I think that addicting to 
 have more negative outcomes than 
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  onChange preposition
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  our 
childrenChange noun form
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 .
 with, why is 
 case? You might wonder. Smartphone provides lots of lucrative features on 
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   infatuate our young generation. 
 using 
internetCorrect article usage
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  become easier present 
 previous decades.  For the well-being of modern technological prowess, in 
 have lots of specialised attractive functions like 
 types of games, all kinds of movies and 
 which force human beings mainly the child to become addicted on it and 
 conducting these functions are too easy 
 why 
 don’t find any problem to 
 it resulting in they pass a huge amount of 
 by 
 it. 
, the costs of 
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deviceFix the agreement mistake
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  are under 
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 peoplesChange to a genitive case
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  affordability, thereby parents and relatives often gift 
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  to their kids so that 
 can 
 them when they are doing their daily activities. 
, it is often observed that 
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  are now preferChange the verb form
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  to play 
a special gamesCorrect the article-noun agreement
a special game
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  called ‘PUBG’ on phones rather than on filed and 
  feel relax while they are using phones cause it offers less possibility to get 
 injury. 
, 
technologicalCorrect article usage
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  race 
areChange the verb form
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  developing every which 
enableCorrect subject-verb agreement
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   to 
 it.
 
, due to using it continuously, 
 are becoming poor 
onChange preposition
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  their education and falling 
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   diseases. 
 should concentrate on education 
in Change preposition
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 earlier but they spend a great amount of 
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 operating 
 and they often don’t realise 
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itCorrect your spelling
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  that how much 
 they pass 
 they don’t make 
 for education possible leading to get 
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  on 
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 . 
, they 
 find problems 
onChange preposition
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  eyesCorrect article usage
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 , bones and other physical barriers. 
, one of my cousins who is a 
 student after having Tablet gets fewer marks 
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  sector and 
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  to 
putsChange the verb
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  for losing eye prosperity due to using tablet progressively. 
, the more you 
 modern devices 
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inCorrect your spelling
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  earlierAdd an article
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  age, the lower 
 you get to do other activities. 
In conclusion, technological development 
makeChange the verb form
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  peopleChange noun form
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  life faster and the 
 of it turn 
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 simple which makes 
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  it more 
. Using 
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  both positive and negative outcomes, but I think that negativity is more than positivity.