Nowadays, all ages people
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our
are becoming addicted to technological devices
as
. They are influenced by it alarmingly. There are many reasons behind using
to a greater extent. I think that addicting to
have more negative outcomes than
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onChange preposition
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our
childrenChange noun form
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lifeReplace the word
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.
with, why is
case? You might wonder. Smartphone provides lots of lucrative features on
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infatuate our young generation.
using
internetCorrect article usage
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become easier present
previous decades. For the well-being of modern technological prowess, in
have lots of specialised attractive functions like
types of games, all kinds of movies and
which force human beings mainly the child to become addicted on it and
conducting these functions are too easy
why
don’t find any problem to
it resulting in they pass a huge amount of
by
it.
, the costs of
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of
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deviceFix the agreement mistake
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are under
the Correct article usage
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peoplesChange to a genitive case
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affordability, thereby parents and relatives often gift
itCorrect pronoun usage
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to their kids so that
can
them when they are doing their daily activities.
, it is often observed that
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are now preferChange the verb form
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to play
a special gamesCorrect the article-noun agreement
a special game
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called ‘PUBG’ on phones rather than on filed and
feel relax while they are using phones cause it offers less possibility to get
injury.
,
technologicalCorrect article usage
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race
areChange the verb form
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developing every which
enableCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to
it.
, due to using it continuously,
are becoming poor
onChange preposition
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their education and falling
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diseases.
should concentrate on education
in Change preposition
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earlier but they spend a great amount of
by Change preposition
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operating
and they often don’t realise
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itCorrect your spelling
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that how much
they pass
they don’t make
for education possible leading to get
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on
examAdd an article
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.
, they
find problems
onChange preposition
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eyesCorrect article usage
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, bones and other physical barriers.
, one of my cousins who is a
student after having Tablet gets fewer marks
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academicAdd an article
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sector and
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to
putsChange the verb
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a Change preposition
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for losing eye prosperity due to using tablet progressively.
, the more you
modern devices
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inCorrect your spelling
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earlierAdd an article
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age, the lower
you get to do other activities.
In conclusion, technological development
makeChange the verb form
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peopleChange noun form
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life faster and the
of it turn
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simple which makes
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it more
. Using
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both positive and negative outcomes, but I think that negativity is more than positivity.