You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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Dear Ali, I hope
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letter finds you well. I
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missed your birthday
party
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, so I am writing to apologise and explain why I could not come. Unfortunately, I did not attend your
party
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and I am very sorry about
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matter. In fact, I was planning for that
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last
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week and I was very happy to see you and our friends. I have s strong reason for my absence. Indeed,
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the evening of your
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party's day
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, my mother
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called me and asked me to go to the hospital.
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, I went there immediately and found
my
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father had
an
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terrible car accident and his leg was broken.
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, I was
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hospital
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until midnight.
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, I like to see you and celebrate your
party
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. If you are free on Saturday, we can go to the Italian restaurant
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near the shopping mall. Do write back
soom
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. I am longing to see you. Lots of love, Mohammad
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