You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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Dear Ali, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I

have

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missed your birthday

party

, so I am writing to apologise and explain why I could not come. Unfortunately, I did not attend your

party

and I am very sorry about

this

matter. In fact, I was planning for that

from

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last

week and I was very happy to see you and our friends. I have s strong reason for my absence. Indeed,

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the evening of your

party's day

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, my mother

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called me and asked me to go to the hospital.

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, I went there immediately and found

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out my

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father had

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terrible car accident and his leg was broken.

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, I was

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hospital

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until midnight.

Finally

, I like to see you and celebrate your

party

. If you are free on Saturday, we can go to the Italian restaurant

that is

near the shopping mall. Do write back

soom

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soon

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. I am longing to see you. Lots of love, Mohammad

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8 paragraphs

162 words

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Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?