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After completing High School and before going to college or university, some students take a year of either for work or travel. What do you think is better traveling or working? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

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Taking a year gap after finishing schooling is commonly seen in many societies. During
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 essay will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of travelling and working, and explain why I believe working is better. In terms of travelling, there are two main benefits, The most prominent one is that the
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 can take a break from their
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 and enjoy their life. Indeed, studying is very stressful, especially nowadays as the school curriculum has increased drastically. Another merit of leisure- trips is that
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 can gain more knowledge from the experiences they had while travelling. Having travelled overseas, they would learn about different cultures, traditions, and lifestyles, which would make them a better individual in the future. In the case of working, the main merit is that youngsters would gain practical experience. By working as a trainee in a car workshop, they would learn the basics of engineering, even though they are not technically qualified. These
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 stop depending on their parents for silly things. The demerits cannot be overlooked, even though the advantages of having a year break are far more. A huge amount of capital is required in order to facilitate a year-long trip. About working, many teenagers would discontinue their
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, once they started earning,
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 are losing the opportunity to gain an education. In conclusion, a break from
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 after completing high school for a job or travel can benefit the
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 positively by acquiring many life skills, even though it is expensive, and some might not resume their
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. Personally, I believe that it is important to take a break from
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 and gain practical knowledge.
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