The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Well-being is the most crucial gift in
people
's life. Without being healthy, ones cannot enjoy the happy and meaningful time of their life. However
, there is an argument that people
are getting more unhealthy than before and it seems to be getting worse moving forward. I totally disagree with this
statement and I will articulate my perception in this
essay.
To commence with, a number of people
are aware of their health and spend more time taking care
of themselves. With the advancement of technology, there are gyms and sports centres opening in the cities and towns and this
motivates individuals, especially, youths to go there either to work out, do Zumba dances or do yoga, based on their interests. Moreover
, employers not only care
about the best result of their work but also
begin to expand mini-physical activities in their offices or companies to allow employees to have some spaces for relaxation like table tennis or movie club. This
can make people
feel refreshed and healthy both physically and mentally so that they can be productive and proactive.
On the contrary
, there are claims that people
are unfit because of their eating habits and their easy lifestyle. It is true to some extent, but this
can be solved by the inspiration from their friends or family. For example
, there is a campaign run by a group of women in their fifties, where they gather and share ideas on how to cook organic and fresh meals so that they can balance their nutrition and also
can take care
of their people
in their families. As a matter of fact, this
good practice is spread by word of mouth and people
will be more aware of their healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, individuals are so busy with their life, however
, they are also
now becoming active and taking more care
of their health both physically and mentally.Submitted by nannphongnoan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite