When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a heated debate about how to construct
buildings
and whether the most important factor is considered the use of the building or exterior view
. But I do find to erect buildings
there are an immense diversity of factors that must be taken into account. I will declare my opinion in the following of this
essay.
On the one hand, these days you can find a tremendous variety of buildings
that are known by their appearance
. So one feature that made them well-known in the world is the outside view
. For example
, a known building called Milad tower
which with about 435 meters tall is considered the tallest tower
in Iran and the sixth-tallest telecommunication tower
in the world, the appearance
factor of this
tower
distinguishes it from other towers. Sure, before its use the appearance
of this
tower
is highlighted in minds.
On the other hand
, it is not true that we just take the measures of the buildings
through their appearance
. There is no doubt that it is a determinative factor but other issues are outstanding. As much as the view
is important other factors such
as the target of constructing this
building, used materials, and needed standards in construction are monumental as much. For instance
, a colossal store is not surrounded by just its appearance
but the rate of car parks and inside design can be other major factors. Paris city is a decent example, where you can find buildings
with notable architecture along with being modern and cutting-edge with different uses.
In conclusion, I would say buildings
are not just fenced in exterior view
or how to harness. Designing a building is meant to be admired by regarding all sides of the construction.Submitted by miladsabbaghi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite