Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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access to digital

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situation is that the digital version

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more convenient. Simultaneously, humans are over-extended with

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work, so spare

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nowadays bring many advantages. They can read the

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if they have a phone side by side. To conclude, I once again

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nowadays very suitable for us, because it

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and convenient for many circumstances.

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